In the class of Literature we read a story called "The prison" and in the class of Writing the teacher told us to write an essay about this story "The prison", written by Bernard Malamud, talked about Tommy, that because of some problems of stealing he had, now the consequences made him feel like in a "prison". This essay will analyse some themes of the story, which are Life as Prison and Hope for a Change. The first theme that is "Life as Prison" explained why Tommy's life was like a "prison". Being oblaiged to marry with someone he did not want and work in a place he never chose, that was what made him feel in a "prison". "Tony would marry her and the father-in-law would out of his savings" The second theme which is "Hope for a change" talked about Tommy and the little girl, and how he feels reflect in his past with her. So, he wants to explain to her the consequences of stealing, maybe she...
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ResponderEliminarYou did a very nice infographic. However there are some things to correct, not only related to grammar and spelling but also to content. You say that from the very beginning Eddie reveals his incestuous love for Catherine, when that's not really true. In fact, you used the same quote to say that it shows how caring he is and then how incestuous he is, which is a contradiction.
On the other hand, Catherine doesn't think she is immature, on the contrary, she's trying to act like a grown-up.
Be careful with the words reveal and rebel, they are not the same. To reveal is to show and a rebel is a person that stands agains something established.
I really liked you personal response to the characters. It shows you have actually tried to place yourselves in their shoes.
Well done!
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