En la clase de Lengua, estamos viendo algunas poesías de autores y leímos una del gran autor Baldomero Fernández Moreno, y decidimos hacer un poema sobre como vivimos la ultima hora en nuestro colegio La última hora, eterna es, inquieta y desespera, las bocinas de los autos y colectivos, los padres gritando a la salida, mi parpadeo de ojos, esperando el ruido de la campana, los bancos llenos de hojas, la profesora explicando la tarea, el rechinar de las sillas, la brisa que llega desde la ventana, susurrando los últimos minutos, los gritos de los nenes de primaria, la vibración del piso, al ser escuchado el timbre, los alumnos tirándose por la escalera, como si un terremoto los persiguiera, así se vive la última hora en mi colegio, sufriendo y desesperándose.
Girls,
ResponderEliminarYou did a very nice infographic. However there are some things to correct, not only related to grammar and spelling but also to content. You say that from the very beginning Eddie reveals his incestuous love for Catherine, when that's not really true. In fact, you used the same quote to say that it shows how caring he is and then how incestuous he is, which is a contradiction.
On the other hand, Catherine doesn't think she is immature, on the contrary, she's trying to act like a grown-up.
Be careful with the words reveal and rebel, they are not the same. To reveal is to show and a rebel is a person that stands agains something established.
I really liked you personal response to the characters. It shows you have actually tried to place yourselves in their shoes.
Well done!
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